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Yellow

Discussion in 'Appraisal Gallery' started by beatnik69, Oct 11, 2021.

  1. beatnik69

    beatnik69 Well-Known Member

    We have a street photography competition coming up this week, but I didn't have much to enter, so went out yesterday and got this.

    [​IMG]Yellow by Gary Robinson Photography, on Flickr
     
  2. PeteRob

    PeteRob Well-Known Member

    Seems a bit dark to me. If the theme is yellow then you've done quite well. I'd play with the saturation/hue on the tower crane so that it is less orange and closer to the other yellows.
     
  3. beatnik69

    beatnik69 Well-Known Member

    Thanks Pete. I need to sort out my monitors. on one monitor it looks quite dark to me, but on another it's much brighter. It is brighter on my phone, but the print came out quite dark.
     
  4. RovingMike

    RovingMike Crucifixion's a doddle...

    Agree with Pete, but every pixel you go beyond this crop is weakening the idea:

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  5. beatnik69

    beatnik69 Well-Known Member

    I reprinted it and it looks much better.
     
  6. Zak52

    Zak52 Well-Known Member

    I really like the original. There is plenty of context, the red car seems to balance the yellow and the increased background adds to the ‘street’ feel.
     
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  7. lfc1892

    lfc1892 Well-Known Member

    Really needed a step to the right and a twist to the left to open it up and make more of the yellows and less of the backdrop
     
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