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I just saw it

Discussion in 'Appraisal Gallery' started by james6, Oct 3, 2021.

  1. james6

    james6 Well-Known Member

    Russell.jpg Walking back to pick the car up. My son stood to take in the view,
     
  2. PeteRob

    PeteRob Well-Known Member

    Certainly a good view! I think I find the image a bit cluttered with a fight between the foreground and the background view. My eye goes across the frame to the figure and out of the right hand side.
     
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  3. james6

    james6 Well-Known Member

    Thanks for the input. Yes. I was tempted to centrilise the figure but I didn't want to block the view that was attracting the figure and I liked the splash of colour of the clothes against the view. But of course it does lead the eye.
     
  4. MJB

    MJB Well-Known Member

    I'd be tempted to crop the bottom to remove the car bonnet and clone out the crane.
     
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  5. james6

    james6 Well-Known Member

    Yes. Its worth a bit of time I think. This is straight shot from a mobile phone so I will probably have a play with it. It was taken late Saturday.
    Cheers.
     
  6. RovingMike

    RovingMike Crucifixion's a doddle...

    I think it is better as part of a set on some kind of subject, or illustrating a point. Need to be able to see the point of it before any tinkering has relevance. The depth of field (I know it was a phone) sort of implies the background is the point and the figure just an observer.
     
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