Hi,


I'd like receive critics and tips to improve.


My goal was get a nice light and register the moment.


I also would like to know if the exposition is right.


Exif data


Camera Nikon D5200
Exposure 0.033 sec (1/30)
Aperture f/4.8
Focal Length 32 mm
ISO Speed 1600
Exposure Bias 0 EV
Flash No Flash

 

Really nice portrait

Maybe crop lower body/legs out of photo?

 

Yes, it would improve for cropping. Also possibly just lighten the shadows a touch. This is one of those pictures that is really more for the family, but in this context it is a pleasant child shot.

 

It looks very over exposed to me. Must have been very dark to need those exif numbers, so I think a burst of flash would have been better for a family snap. Would be more flattering to crop the bottom third off, but that starts to avoid it being the snap record that it is.

 

Thanks for the comments, I'll try crop and rise the shadows.

 

Nice family record. Maybe something like this?

 

Thanks very nice.

And how about this?

 

I don't like artificial vigneting and the post prosess really brings out the noise in the iso1600 so not to my liking. The balack and white one on the other hand, I would crop a bit from the bottom abow her knee keeping just enough air under the babies legs,apart from that I like the last one.

 

Agree with this - a much better shot.

 

My non-professional opinion is:
Nice light on the kid, but her face is quite dark.
By lowering the camera a bit (and maybe left a bit to not lose the babies face) would make it more of a 'portrait' for the wall...

 

Thanks all of you for help me.

As you can see I'm a beginner and all help is important.

Hugs