1. This site uses cookies. By continuing to use this site, you are agreeing to our use of cookies. Learn More.

First SLR shot!

Discussion in 'Appraisal Gallery' started by zoellamy, Apr 27, 2012.

  1. zoellamy

    zoellamy New Member

    [​IMG]
    First ever picture taken on a SLR camera, only had a 'proper' camera for 1 day so am definitely new to this! Other than the image not being straight how could I improve this photo?
    Thanks :)
     
  2. nimbus

    nimbus Well-Known Member

    I have seen a lot worse. Possibly include the feet, the boots look slightly odd cut off. Not being straight looks more down to the camera angle rather than it not being level.
     
  3. Caulkhead

    Caulkhead Well-Known Member

    Good photo and pose but you have cut off her toes...:D
     
  4. corado

    corado Member

    It looks like a good start.
    Why the size is so small and why there are no EXIF information on Photobucket?

    The image is not bad, but (I will speak subjectively, only about the weaknesses):

    • the framing is too tight - I think it needs a little more space upside too, not only on the right side, as it was already said.
    • I'm not sure, it might be my screen's fault, but the subject looks slightly overexposed. This might be because of the dark background, the metering system of the camera was fooled by it. As I see the picture now, I think -1/3 exposure compensation would have helped.
    • the background (the bush) is too close, and not only that has influenced exposure, but it can't be separated from subject and is kind of distracting.
    I think that there is not much left to improve, but you have potential and I am sure that you will came out in no time with better ones:)

    Have good light!
     
  5. zoellamy

    zoellamy New Member

    Thankyou so much for the fab cc! This forum is deifnitely ALOT nicer than I expected!!
    Getting my camera, photobucket and this forum account all in one day has left me with lots of learning (hence small picture size!)
     
  6. PhilW

    PhilW Well-Known Member

    There seems to be something very very wrong with this picture!!

    Every other first shot I've seen (or taken) was of a desk or a pet....

    Please try again with a more appropriate subject :D
     
  7. AlexMonro

    AlexMonro Old Grand Part Deux

    Not bad for a first attempt. Yes, the feet are cut off, but at least the background.is nicely subdued, and the lighting isn't too harsh.
     
  8. zoellamy

    zoellamy New Member

    Haha, I was so tempted to just shoot anything (I think pot plant was closest at the time!) but instead I made my little sister come to the park and be my model!
     
  9. RovingMike

    RovingMike Crucifixion's a doddle...

    Hi if you have done something like cut bits off, just look and see if the aspect ratio can work another way. If you cut more off, it doesn't look like a mistake. The head is just a bit too high so this is not a complete solution, but it helps. The gap under the bench is a bit spare so can come off. As I said this is not an ideal aspect ratio, but any more should be on the top, not bottom.

    Well done.

    [​IMG]
     
  10. demonboy

    demonboy Well-Known Member

    Phil, stop giving them bad ideas ;)

    A fantastic first shot, if you ask me, which you were. Like everyone else says, watch out for cutting body parts off and when you have a horizontal like that bench, try and stand square on to it.
     
  11. Caulkhead

    Caulkhead Well-Known Member

    Nice crop Mike! I like the triangular shape you created. Well spotted!
     

Share This Page