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Breakwater

Discussion in 'Appraisal Gallery' started by spinno, Nov 2, 2017.

  1. spinno

    spinno Well-Known Member

    Does this high contrast image conversion work for you. I think it does for me (which of course is most important;)) but does it work for you.
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  2. dream_police

    dream_police Well-Known Member

    For me as a piece of art then the people need to go. I'd also remove the seaweed? bottom half left and a small bit from the top to even it out (remove the little wave area)
     
  3. Catriona

    Catriona Well-Known Member

    It would work for me if the top was cropped down (to 'well known member' on the left) - or if the foreground had the definition of the upper section and the upper had the lack of definition of the lower section!

    But you know me! RM will come along and correct me. ;)
     
  4. PeteRob

    PeteRob Well-Known Member

    I agree that the curvature at the top should go. I'm not looking at it on a monitor so it might be that is the reason that areas look bleached out. I'd rather see a hint of texture everywhere in the sand
     
  5. spinno

    spinno Well-Known Member

    Try this
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  6. PeteRob

    PeteRob Well-Known Member

    too severe a crop for me, just needed a touch off the top. Bit too dark now, it was the contrast that needed easing off not so much the exposure I'd leave the folk in, their removal is too obvious.
     
  7. RovingMike

    RovingMike Crucifixion's a doddle...

    Agree the curve at the top to go, but the edit reduces it to nothing but a line of blocked up posts. Main issue for me is the people are just not photogenically arranged. They could work, but you needed to wait for the right moment. Could run a whole competition on where to place them and how.
     
  8. beatnik69

    beatnik69 Well-Known Member

    It needs a keyline too for posting on a forum like this
     
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  9. spinno

    spinno Well-Known Member

    Thanks for the comments. When I fire up the computer next I will try out your suggestions'
     
  10. Geren

    Geren Well-Known Member

    Talking about 'well known members'....is that a series of large-scale representations of male genitalia in the form colloquially known as 'cocknballs' scratched out in the sand?
     
  11. spinno

    spinno Well-Known Member

    I plead ignorance and innocence
     
  12. spinno

    spinno Well-Known Member

    BTW was that harassment
     
  13. Geren

    Geren Well-Known Member


    I know. It was my upbringing that did it.
     
  14. spinno

    spinno Well-Known Member

    Calm down dear it's just inappropriate:p
     

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