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Aunt and his niece

Discussion in 'Appraisal Gallery' started by Renan Paiva, Dec 9, 2013.

  1. Renan Paiva

    Renan Paiva Member

    Hi,


    I'd like receive critics and tips to improve.


    My goal was get a nice light and register the moment.


    I also would like to know if the exposition is right.


    Exif data


    Camera Nikon D5200
    Exposure 0.033 sec (1/30)
    Aperture f/4.8
    Focal Length 32 mm
    ISO Speed 1600
    Exposure Bias 0 EV
    Flash No Flash

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  2. Kamepa

    Kamepa Well-Known Member

    Really nice portrait :)

    Maybe crop lower body/legs out of photo?
     
  3. nimbus

    nimbus Well-Known Member

    Yes, it would improve for cropping. Also possibly just lighten the shadows a touch. This is one of those pictures that is really more for the family, but in this context it is a pleasant child shot.
     
  4. RovingMike

    RovingMike Crucifixion's a doddle...

    It looks very over exposed to me. Must have been very dark to need those exif numbers, so I think a burst of flash would have been better for a family snap. Would be more flattering to crop the bottom third off, but that starts to avoid it being the snap record that it is.
     
  5. Renan Paiva

    Renan Paiva Member

    Thanks for the comments, I'll try crop and rise the shadows.

    ;)
     
  6. Caulkhead

    Caulkhead Well-Known Member

    Nice family record. Maybe something like this?

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  7. Renan Paiva

    Renan Paiva Member

    Thanks very nice.

    And how about this?

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  8. Snorri

    Snorri Well-Known Member

    I don't like artificial vigneting and the post prosess really brings out the noise in the iso1600 so not to my liking. The balack and white one on the other hand, I would crop a bit from the bottom abow her knee keeping just enough air under the babies legs,apart from that I like the last one.
     
    Last edited: Dec 9, 2013
  9. Charlie59

    Charlie59 Well-Known Member

    Agree with this - a much better shot.
     
  10. Myopic George

    Myopic George Well-Known Member

    My non-professional opinion is:
    Nice light on the kid, but her face is quite dark.
    By lowering the camera a bit (and maybe left a bit to not lose the babies face) would make it more of a 'portrait' for the wall...
     
  11. Renan Paiva

    Renan Paiva Member

    Thanks all of you for help me.

    As you can see I'm a beginner and all help is important.

    Hugs
     

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