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sjaszczak
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Re: first Mamiya shot

05/07/2008 21:41

I like the grainy texture in the sky but the composition doesn't work for me.

What was to the left of the frame? I get the feeling when I look at it that it would be better if the main building in shot were positioned further to the right of the frame.

Perhaps you could have moved a little closer too...to cut out a bit of the road in the foreground...

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first Mamiya shot	chris000	05/07/2008 19:53
Re: first Mamiya shot	sjaszczak	05/07/2008 21:41
Re: first Mamiya shot	chris000	05/07/2008 21:58
Re: first Mamiya shot	daft_biker	06/07/2008 17:15
Re: first Mamiya shot	chris000	06/07/2008 17:43

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