| sjaszczak |
| (A Real Gentleman) |
| 05/07/2008 21:41 |
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Re: first Mamiya shot
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I like the grainy texture in the sky but the composition doesn't work for me.
What was to the left of the frame? I get the feeling when I look at it that it would be better if the main building in shot were positioned further to the right of the frame.
Perhaps you could have moved a little closer too...to cut out a bit of the road in the foreground...