I know this is probably not something to voice to you, because you will no doubt tear apart my every word but here it goes....
Photography is about art and appreciating the beauty of the planet we live on....surely if you are not slightly laid back you loose the meaning of photography and make it loose its spark? (not only that but you make the model feel exremely uncomfortable not allowing him/her to work to their best standards)
Mario Testino and David Bailey got to where they were by yes, working extremely hard, but they also had to take a large step back and look at the world not through the poisoned eyes of money and greed but through those of a mind of clairty....
If more photographers remembered why they came into the industry they would maybe produce better photos, with more meaning and soul....

I agree a poorly written cover letter to an agency wouldnt get me very far, but i was mearly writing a post on forum lol not really a biggy is it...
Everyone has being extremly helpful and i can handle constructive critisim but bettina wasnt being helpful at all. She just sat there critising my grammer, i didnt come here to be marked on my grammer, i came here to gain some knoledge and advice on photographers....